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一、题文
为配合我市开展文明城市（buildacivilizedcity）创建的活动，你校举办以HowtoBehaveWell为主题的英语征文比赛．现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文．提示：1．衣着整洁；2．保持环境卫生；3．待人有礼，乐于助人；4．遵守交通规则．要求：1．文章必须包括所给提示中1-4项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥；2．文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息．HowtoBehaveWell？Inordertobuildacivilizedcity，westudentsshouldtryourbesttobehavewellintheactivities．．
二、解答
How to Behave Well？ In order to build a civilized city，we students should try our best to behave well in the activities． It"s a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy．（高分句型一） Our city should be kept clean every day．Don"t throw litter or spit about．It"s good manners to say"Thank you"and"Please"and so on．We should never say dirty words．Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need．For example，when we are on a bus，we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies．We should also obey traffic rules．When the traffic lights are red，we should stop．And we"d better not talk or laugh loudly in public．（行为举止良好的具体表现） If everyone behaves well，our city will be more beautiful and more attractive．（高分句型二）（期望）三、分析
高分句型一：It"s a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy保持我们的衣服干净整洁是一个好习惯．在这里，为了避免头重脚轻，故用it充当形式主语，后面的动词不定式是真正的主语．高分句型二：If everyone behaves well，our city will be more beautiful and more attractive如果每个人都表现良好，我们的城市会更美丽更迷人．这是由if引导的条件状语从句，要遵循主将从现的原则．（1）句型多样化，不要I（We）…到底，使人觉得乏味．（2）适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句．（3）进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句．（4）适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词．（5）偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感．本文到此结束，希望对大家有所帮助。
